Mar 22 2009, 05:29 AM
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I colour stuff ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 567 Joined: 20-December 02 Member No.: 11,451 |
(IMG:http://www.seanellery.com/gallery/albums/userpics/witchblade_finch.jpg)
So flipping busy with the day job (teacher) lately that I haven't had time to do much at all, so when boysicat posted the inks on his deviantart.com gallery to this I grabbed it and knocked up some colours. Sometimes I ask myself why I don't colour witchblade more often, then I get to the witchblade arm stuff and remember why not... it takes ages! pencils by David Finch cheers Sean -------------------- |
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Mar 22 2009, 12:37 PM
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Wannabe Hack. ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 862 Joined: 21-August 00 Member No.: 7,582 |
Honestly this is a huge step back Sean. it looks like you didn't even try or pay attention to what you were doing.
The first thing I notice is the lighting and shading. Specifically the purple shadow on the top of her breast. That doesn't make any sense. Even if there wasn't an apparent light source coming from her hand. The purple tone doesn't fit, nor should there even be a shadow there. The modeling on the skin needs a good deal of work. You should take some time and learn what the structure of the face is. The planes, muscles, and shapes. With a pencil, spend some time doing life drawing. And do it with strong lighting conditions. The rim lighting is extremely inconsistent. You have this really strong bluelight hitting her butt, presumably coming from her hand? but its not angled from there, and despite the fact skin is far more reflective then cotton, her skin isn't showing any light coming from there on her backside. Rendering the creases in her shirt and sweatpants at the knees would help a bit. -------------------- |
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SeanE Witchblade Mar 22 2009, 05:29 AM
Pig Boy That's not best Finch drawing in the world but... Mar 22 2009, 05:33 AM
Divia I dunno like it. Seems to be a fine pic. Mar 22 2009, 05:54 AM
phrostie Awsome job there SeanE. Mar 22 2009, 06:23 AM
SeanE all valid points - and like I said, I've been ... Mar 22 2009, 10:41 PM
billyjimbo Still better than 95% Sean,
Just a note on the ha... Mar 23 2009, 06:07 AM
DOPE_MAN finch is always hit or miss
either is something ... Mar 29 2009, 03:04 PM
Amund I have a strong urge to quote Sir Mix-Alot...... Mar 29 2009, 08:32 PM
jaymes_e06 I have a strong urge to quote Sir Mix-Alot......
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JAM Nice SeanE...
Your color/rendering works(to me), m... Mar 31 2009, 07:09 PM![]() ![]() |
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